Monday, 30 July 2007
what I did in the weekend
In the weekend I got new clothes from Jk because I ran out of them and I allso got a new Jackat but it wont fit so mum is going to get me a new one after I went to the two doller shop I got a skipping rope and saw Zoe after all of that I got a gingerman from the Bakery then I went home and found my dad was going away I was sad.
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3 comments:
Well done Brianna!
You have worked hard to add lots of detail to your story. I hope you get a jacket that fits you soon.... you could wear it to school to keep out the cold!
Next time when you write your story I want you to think about using more full stops where they are needed. I was exhausted after reading your story in one go!
From Rachel
Did you know that in the US we call a skipping rope a "jump rope" and we call gingermen "gingerbread men"?
Do you like your new clothes?
from Josh
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